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“高分就是硬道理”系列范文16:前因后果

(2009-11-22 23:31:49)
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“高分就是硬道理”系列范文16:前因后果

 

“高分就是硬道理”系列范文16:前因后果

 

【1】Nowadays, it is true that people have a larger amount of freedom when choosing the place for living or for working. This development is a result of the gradual improvement of technologies that make communication and transportation easier. My mom, for example, used to consider distance to work or my school as a factor when choosing an apartment but now we are living in the suburbs, far from my school and her workplace downtown because I can still get to school by subway and she can still get to work by car

【1】现在人们在考虑生活和工作地点时与以往相比有了更大的自由。这是由于科技带动交通领域不断发展的结果。例如:过去我的妈妈在选择购房位置时一定要鸯银居住地点距离工作地点及离我上学的位置要近,现在由于交通的发展),妈妈买了私家车,所以我们居住在远离工作单位和学校的郊区,也十分便利。

 

【2】There are many profound effects that this development has. One of the most obvious advantages is that people have more choices. For instance, those who work in urban areas can now choose to live either in the city or move to the suburbs where it is cleaner and quieter. A second benefit may lie in the fact that as more people move away from the cities and into the surrounding areas, problems like overcrowding and skyrocketing house prices can be alleviated.

【2】这一发展确实带来了深远的影响。其中最为明显的好处就是人们有了更多的选择余地。例如:那些在市区工作的人们现在既可以考虑继续住在市中心,也可以考虑住在更干净、更安静的郊区。另外一个好处在于这样的发展有利于缓解目前大都市所面临的市中心人口密集和房价迅猛攀升的问题。

 

【3】On the other hand, there are some negative effects stemming from this trend as well. There is a possibility that many people will choose to live in the same suburb, thereby creating new overcrowding problems and making traffic going into the city worse. But this is a problem that can be solved by offering efficient public transportation and carefully developing new land.

【3】但是,这一趋势也存在着一些负面影响。由于很多人都向往生活在条件好,商业发达的地区,这就有可能造成新的人口密集和通往城市的交通拥挤问题。但是这一问题可以通过提供有效的公共交通方式和谨慎地开发新土地来解决。

 

【4】I tend to think that people should be able to choose where they live based on their personal where they live based on their personal preferences, although social demands and limitations have to be taken into consideration, lest we create more than we solve.

【4】我认为人们应该能够根据他们自己的喜好来决定居住的地点,尽管这应恢在考虑社会需求的前提下。否则我们制造的麻烦比我们解决的问题还要多。

 

1.         Nowadays, it is true that people have a larger amount of freedom when choosing the place for living or for working. 本句的重要性在于强调了主题在于人们对于生活方式的选择,而不是技术的发展。其中……when doing 分词作状语的句子是加一个提分的关键。

2.         This development is a result of 李阳对上述事实的原因进行分析,起到强调主题的作用,句子结构等同于It is because……,但是更富于变化。

3.         There are many profound effects that this development has. One of the most obvious advantages is that people have more choices.主题句在段首突出“优点”。其中profound表示意义深远,是一个褒义词。用来替代strong points 等表示“好处”的词汇。

4.         A second benefit may lie in the fact that 上下两个标注的句子实际上相当于firstly secondly,但是由于利用了句型表达,不但增加了字数,而且提升句式变化。

5.         On the other hand, there are some negative effects stemming from this trend as well.前面的on the other hand 是表示上下两个段落描述的是一个事物不同的两方面。而不理解为“但是”。

6.         There is a possibility that 这种使用possibility 的方式,实际上是在控制语言的度。因为是可能性,暗示读者此处不是现实,并不是作者最想要强调的内容。

7.         I tend to think that 讨论优缺点的题目需要表态,所以在文章的最后一段仍旧需要说明自己的看法。Tend to 可以使语言变得柔和、客气。

 

 

 

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