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(2011-01-13 10:45:15)
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Show off my homework.
  
  最先的版本:
  A woman, whose name is Mrs Pessimism,is beautiful and attractive. Her house is beside the road.It is not a bad house. She always tries to be warm hearted, but she really is not a good hostess. She is not a wise woman,in fact she is a stupid and lazy woman. There is another woman whose name is Mrs Optiimism. She is a real beauty.You will not get to know her,if you stop?at the house of Mrs Pessimism!!!
  Mrs Optimism, is a wise and brave woman.
  She will say "stop!" to something that is not kind .You will always be happy if you have her as your companion.
  It does not matter if you are a beautiful, or ugly girl; a handsome talented or average boy. It is not important what you are.
  The important thing,is which one, you want to be friends with.
  I love Mrs Optimism. She is my best friend.
  
  老师的批语:It is a really good exercise,forget the mistakes you have a real talent for writing.
  I loved reading it. The words are true,you do have choices in this life. I could not give you five stars. What a lesson in life I have learnt.!!!!!
  
  我在老师的鼓舞下又做了修改:
  I was excited by your five star.This is my new one.
  Pessimism is a beautiful woman. She has a nice house besides the road. She always tries to be warm-hearted to her guests, but she is not a very good hostess. In fact, she is not wise, very stupid and very lazy.
  On the other hand, Optimism (who is also very beautiful) is very different from her twin sister Pessimism. She is wise, brave and warm. She says ‘stop’ to anything unhappy that comes your way. You will always be happy with her as a companion.
  Whether you are a beautiful girl or a not so beautiful girl; a handsome boy or a not so handsome boy, average or talented, it doesn’t matter. What is important is whether you are friends with Mrs. Pessimism or Mrs. Optimism.
  I love Mrs. Optimism. She is my best friend.

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