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How to Prepare for CET-4 Writing?
In taking CET tests, we will be required to write
a short essay within 30 minutes. It is really a headache for some
of us to deal with it. I am sure most of you present here must be
growing concerned with this question: how can we improve our
writing skills within a little more than two
months?
What annoys us is that
most of us have a “limited” vocabulary; actually, most of us tend
to be more adept at reading than other learning skills such as
listening, speaking, writing and translating. We find it less
difficult to understand when we are reading some essays. But when
we are required to write something, we will feel at loss how to
begin with. In my opinion, it is mainly because most of us are too
passive to practice writing often although every one of us knows
quite well the truth that practice makes perfect. As a matter of
fact, we have a larger vocabulary than we can imagine. But due to
lack of repeated practice, we just put most of the words we have
learned in the depth of our minds and never return to visit them.
And we call these words passive ones. So long as we have more
active words in our minds, we will find more freedom to express our
ideas. Most of us put the new English words into their hearts
mechanically and they never know to remember them by their
pronunciations. I think this is the best way to learn new words.
But it is obviously above most of us, especially for those
non-English majors.
Well, it does take time to improve our skills in
remembering new words and in writing essays. Some of us will
probably ask: are there any tips for the improvement of writing
skills?
In dealing with CET-4
writing, we must bear this in mind that we must follow the three
steps below: to present the problem, to analyze the problem and to
solve the problem.
Here I’d like to give
you some examples.
Example
One:
Directions: For this reason, you are allowed
thirty minutes to write a composition. You should write at least
120 words, and base your composition on the outline given
below.
Students are encouraged to start business of their
own when they graduate from university.
1) 就业市场紧张;
2) 对策:鼓励大学毕业生自主创业;
3) 政府需支持。
In planning this essays, we have to have the above
three points in our minds and try to make them clear. Here are the
steps.
First, you’d better
make a list of the key words that will probably be used in your
writing such as “job market”, “fierce competition”, “start
business of their own”, “governmental support”, “preference
policies” and “taxes and tariffs” etc. You can write them down
on a sheet of paper.
Second, start writing
step by step according to the requirements. As for the first point,
we can write like this, “Nowadays the competition in the job
market is very fierce and more and more college students have to
face this embarrassing fact, that is, they will find it more and
more difficult to hunt a good job. For some of them, graduation
means unemployment.” Or “In facing the growing fierce competition
in the present job market, more and more students find themselves
less competitive to get a good job because most of them lack
working experience. For some of them, they have to confront with
this depressing fact that graduation means unemployment.
”
Now you can directly
state the problem to be solved. It’s time for you to express your
opinion or offer your advice and suggestions. So naturally, you
move on to the second step. “What should they do? Is the best way
for them to wait and wait? What about finding a way to start
business of their own? Don’t you think it’s the best way to
reduce stress in the job market? ”
Once you have offered
your advice and suggestions to those students who are bewildered
and stressful, you can tell them your strategy to deal with the
capital problem for it will be the castle in the air to start
business of one’s own without any capital. Here you can go on
writing like this, “But how can they start business without any
capital? In this situation, they must need governmental support
badly. I think that the government can encourage them to put it
into practice by offering them some preference policies on taxes
and tariffs and bank loans and meanwhile sign contracts with them
to elaborate the concerned obligations and responsibilities. Once
they have obtained governmental support, they will surely strive to
realize their dreams. It is undoubtedly a win-win game between the
college students and the government.
”
After writing, you
have to spare some time polishing it. Now the essay reads as
follows.
How to Reduce
Stress in the Job Market?
In facing the growing fierce competition in the
present job market, more and more
students find themselves less competitive to get a
good job because most of them lack working experience. For some of
them, they have to confront with this depressing fact that
graduation means unemployment.
What
should they do? Can they only wait and wait? Well, what about
finding a way to start business of their own? Don’t you think
it’s the best way to reduce stress in the job market?
But can
they start business without any capital? In this situation, they
must need governmental support badly. I think the government can
encourage them to put it into practice by offering some preference
policies on taxes and tariffs and bank loans so that they can put
their ambitions into practice. Once they have obtained governmental
support, they will surely strive to realize their dreams. It is
undoubtedly a win-win game between them both.
Example Two
Directions: For this reason, you are allowed
thirty minutes to write a composition. You should write at least
120 words, and base your composition on the outline given
below.
Write a letter to your cousin, telling him how to adapt himself to
the dormitory life in university.
1) 上大学后,必须适应宿舍生活;
2) 如何适应;
3) 总结。
Before writing, you have to pay attention to the
letter form and to your relationship with the person who will
receive your letter. Thus you don’t have to be formal with him and
you can use some colloquial words. Your cousin must be a freshman;
otherwise he won’t need any advice and suggestions from you. So
you can start with the title like this: “Dear Cousin or Dear
So-and –so”. Also you can express your congratulations to him and
meanwhile point out that he will start a new life and the dormitory
life in university is quite different from that at
home.
When you present the problem,
you can move on to analyze it. Suppose that you have ever studied
at university, you must be experienced enough to offer him some
advice and suggestions. Before you tell him how to adapt to the
dormitory life, you have to help him analyze the reasons. Different
family backgrounds. Different personalities. It is hard to imagine
how these guys can live happily together if they are not generous
towards one another. Finally, after offering him some tips for how
to get along with other people, you can express your best wishes to
him.
Now you see, it’s not that
difficult to write a CET-4 essay?
Here I’d like to present an exemplary essay for
all of you.
Dear Cousin:
Congratulations upon
your entrance into university!
Now you
will start a new life. And you will live away from home and begin a
dormitory life. You know the dormitory life is quite different from
that at home. How to adapt yourself to this sort of life, that’s a
problem.
With
different family backgrounds and different personalities,
naturally, people will probably feel stressed at the thought of
that they will live with some strangers. And they worry about
whether they can get well along with one another. In this
situation, it is hard to imagine if they are not generous towards
one another. I suggest that you communicate with them as much as
possible.
Best
wishes for you and just enjoy your college
life!
Frank Law
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