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句子1. "Contemporarily, social competitions stimulate
modern science, technology and business develop, which
revolutionized our society and effect the quality of people’s life.
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猜测含义: 当今,社会中的竞争促进现代科技和商业的发展,革新社会,改变人们生活质量.
修改建议:
1. contemporarily这个词往往指"当代的,两个人同时处于一个时代".
说当今,还是用currently和nowadays看起来舒展.
2. develop词性错误, development
3. effect词性错误, affect. 同时, affect+人们生活质量, 含义偏贬, 不如用constant
changes.
改后句子:
Nowadays, competition stimulates the development of science and
technology, as well as businesses. It brings about constant changes
in the quality of people's lives and revolutionizes the society we
live in.
句子2
"Besides, if you have a unique character and different thought
method from others, it will help you to achieve success easier.
"
猜测含义: 如果你具有独特的个性和不同的思维方式,你会更容易成功.
修改建议:
1. different thought method: different way of thinking
2. easier是形容词比较级, 这里需要副词 more easily
Besides, a unique character and a different way of thinking can
help a person achieve success more easily.
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