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Weird Invention (稀奇古怪的发明)

(2008-10-27 07:38:38)
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分类: Kevin School Work
By Kevin
Third grade
英文原创:多多(三年级)
中文翻译:妈妈 (N年级)
 
 Chapter 1     Secret Invention and Hideout神秘的发明和藏匿)
    I was up in the attic with my friend Christopher(still Chris for short). My brother Eddie and Chris's brother Raymond were down one set of ladder. It all started when I found a hole on our roof and Eureka! I climbed up and entered the attic. Chris's suggested a science lab and I agreed because I like science just like Chris. I was mixing sunscreen with my mother's perfume. After, I added some wax from a candle. I had created something so stinky I could explode!
   "Let's give this new mixture to my last pumpkin plant."
   Chris agreed,"Soon we'll be expert scientists!"
   We sneaked up to the garden, dumped the invention into the waterer, and hid in the garden. My mom came over to water the plants.
   我和我的好朋友罗宾在上面的阁楼里。 我弟弟啸啸和罗宾的弟弟瑞曼迪在下面的楼梯上。故事的起因是这样的, 我发现房顶上的一个把手, 就这样我终于找到了阁楼,(妈妈注, Eureka, 是西班牙语, 我终于找到了的意思。) 并爬了上去。罗宾建议做科学实验, 我很赞同因为我和他都是科学爱好者。我把防晒霜和妈妈的香水混合起来,又加入了蜡烛里的腊。 我们制造的混合物实在是太粘了, 粘的都可以爆炸了。
    “让我们把这东西浇在我最后一棵南瓜苗上吧!”(妈妈注:我们的南瓜苗都给蜗牛吃了,仅剩下一棵。)
     罗宾附和道:“我们马上就要成为科学家了!”
     我们悄悄的来到院子里, 把我们的发明倒进水管里, 然后在花园里躲了起来。 我妈妈出来浇花了。

Chapter 2  One Big Effect (巨大后果)
   We watched cautiously as the stinky and diamond clear mixture drifted playfully, as if it was alive, towards the pumpkin. As it got soaked into the ground, Chris, Eddie, Raymond, and I got anxious of what would happen. Our eyes gleamed like laser and stars morphed together. Suddenly, with a blinding flash of light and a deafening roaring sound, the pumpkin grew, and grew and grew! It was totally hilarious when my mom started to panic.That's when I popped up   from my hiding place and explain while I held the last ounce of liquid.
    我们很小心的看着那粘稠而又透明的物体快乐地流向南瓜,就好像它是有生命的一般。 当它渗入土地里时, 罗宾,啸啸, 瑞曼迪和我都很想知道会发生什么。我们的眼睛如激光星星般闪着光芒。 突然, 伴着刺眼的光芒和震耳欲聋的声响, 南瓜长啊, 长啊, 长啊!南瓜长得太大了以至于妈妈都开始害怕起来。这时我们才跳出来向妈妈解释, 我手里还拿着最后一盎司的混合液。

Chapter 3  Majesty Pumpkin Mystery (巨大南瓜之谜)
    I touched the pumpkin. it felt hard as a 200 mile thick wall. I made my hardest fist and with lighting speed I strike it with all might.
    "Ow!" I moaned,"I think I broke my bone and pulsed my finger!"
    Chris managed his best Kung Fu chop. His face twisted into a face of pain but said nothing.
    Eddie kicked it so hard it can split metal, but the pumpkin budged not even the hundredth of a millimeter. Raymond pounced   on it but only got a stomachache. I sniffed the air. It smelled like Kit Kat bars. I didn't give up hitting so easily. I took out my tool kit, got out the hammer and banged it hard, my hardest hit, hard enough to topple a building. Bang! The sound was loud but not as loud as the roaring. I took out needles sharp enough to crack a wall, but can't beat this pumpkin. I was still in the sweet sense but not knowing what causing it. I took out a dinosaur tooth (Really a nail) to crack the mystery. Zero percent of movement.
   "Think, think, think!"I murmured to myself.
   I went to the kitchen and got out our largest knife. I swung it over my head.
   Whooom!
   Nothing! We gave up. Dad told me to calm down.
   "There's a new scientist in town, you could ask him!"dad informed.
   I gave the scientist the liquid to study.
   "The wax made the hardness, the perfume made the smell, and sunscreen with things sweet smelling cause growth." he said after studying the liquid for an hour.
   "How do you get rid of the hardness?" I inquired before leaving.
  "About that,"he started"Pour water on it then use something sharp."
   After we got home, Chris wanted to cut it immediately. That's when I heard bad news.
  "Kevin, we can't stay in this house, we don't have enough money!"Mom said looking worried. (超级汗!儿子怎么会有这样的概念!)
   我碰了一下南瓜, 它就像200英里厚的墙一样坚硬。 我攥紧了我的拳头,以光一样的速度, 用尽我的所有力量向南瓜打去。
   “哎呦!”我禁不住呻吟着,“我觉得我的手指都给挤压断了!”
   罗宾用他的功夫掌向南瓜砍去。 他的脸因为痛苦而扭曲在了一起, 一句话都没说出来。
   啸啸用他可以踢断金属的脚向南瓜踢去, 可南瓜纹丝不动。瑞曼迪也去打了一拳, 疼得他抱着拳头好像肚子疼似的。 我嗅了一下空气中的气味,好像巧克力的味道。 我不会那么轻易的就放弃,我拿出了我的工具箱。从里面拿出了锤头, 使劲向南瓜砸去, 我使的劲足以把建筑物砸倒!“咚!”声音响如炸雷。   我又拿出了一根针,这针尖利得可以把墙扎出缝隙。 可都不能把南瓜怎么样。我仍然沉浸在好闻的味道里,可不知道为什么会有这样的味道。我又拿出了恐龙的牙齿,可南瓜还是完好无损。
    “思考,思考,再思考!”我对自己念叨着。
    我去厨房拿出了我们家最大的刀子, 从头上挥下去。
    “嘭!”
   还是没有效果。我们绝望了。爸爸告诉我要冷静。
   “镇上有个新来的科学家, 你们可以请教一下他。”爸爸告诉我们。
   我们给了那个科学家我们的混合液以便他研究。
   “腊会导致坚硬, 香水带来香气, 防晒霜和香气混合在一起让南瓜生长迅速。”科学家研究了一个小时后告诉了我们他的结论。
    “我们怎么才能对付它的坚硬呢?”我临走时问科学家。
    “至于这个嘛,”科学家说,“用水,然后用利器对付。”
     当我们回到家,罗宾就迫不及待地想切南瓜。 就在这时,我听到了一个坏消息:
    “多多,我们不能再住在这栋房子里了,我们没有钱了。”妈妈很忧虑地说道。

Chapter 4 The Idea That Helped the World! 拯救了全世界的主意
   BANG! That's when it hit me. I got the greatest idea in the history of the universe! We could carve the pumpkin into a house! Hard but fun!
   "Better get started or we'll never finish." I suggested.
   My mother got the hose as dad prepared to cut.
   "Wait! Shouldn't we draw what we cut?" Eddie wondered. Raymond snatched the nearest skinny marker. Splash! Slice! After all that hard work we finally managed a pumpkin house. At the exact time, my classmate Namara called.
   "Are you coming to inspect my new house?" I asked.
   "Uh... maybe. " She answered.
   She saw the pumpkin, and she nearly fainted!
   I explained about the mixture made it grow hard and smell good and grow big!
  "You still have to get rid of the slime." She reminded.
   She lifted a shovel next to her. Clunk! Glug! There were millions of giant seeds.
   "Everybody can have a house like this to conserve trees!" I said grinning like a grizzly bear. Very soon, the town was all buying pumpkin seeds and mixture.
   "50 cents an ounce!" I yelled at the top of my lungs. I was rich after that! This event had saved 100,000 trees! I used the money to plant more trees!
   “砰!”就在那时我灵光一闪。 我有了世界上最好的主意!我们可以把这个南瓜雕刻成一栋房子,很难但会很有趣。
   “我们现在就动手!”我建议着。
    妈妈拿着浇水龙头, 爸爸准备刻。
    “等等!难道我们不要先画出来要刻的样子吗?”啸啸问道.
    瑞曼迪拿着最细的笔在画。哗啦!砰!啪!艰苦的努力之后,我们终于刻出了一栋南瓜房子。 就在这时,我的同班同学娜摩来电话。
    “你不想来看看我的新房子吗?”我问道。 
    “那好吧!”她回答。
     当她看到大南瓜时, 差一点晕过去!
     我向她解释了一切, 我们的混合物如何让它长得这么大,还那么香。
     “可你还要把里面的瓤去掉呀!”她提醒我。
     她拿着铲子, 铲出了成千上万的巨大种子。
    “每个人都可以拥有这样的房子,就可以保护树木了。”我笑得像一只大灰熊。 很快,整个小镇的人都在买南瓜种子和混合液。
     “五十美分一盎司!”我高叫着。 从此我变得很富有!这项工程拯救了100,000棵树!我用挣的钱又去种了更多的树。

妈妈评语:
     个人感觉这一篇比上一篇要好, 情节紧凑,废话少了很多。不过有些细节没有交代清楚,还需要再改进。 我很惊诧于多多编故事的能力。这其实是一篇看图说话,图上只有一个硕大无比的南瓜, 一个小男孩手里拿着一个试管。 所有的故事都出自于多多自己的想象。
    

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