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【原创】新韵七绝·夏禾

(2020-05-07 20:59:08)
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晓月

北斗导航

机耕

禾苗

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分类: 诗词歌赋

     夏禾

 \杜马

晓月晨风犹未醒,

导航北斗代纤声,

机耕垅上惊蛙梦。

不日禾苗万里青。

 

   Conciseness

Wordy: he gave many reasons for the failure, but the reasons he gave were not convincing.

Concise: he gave many reasons for the failure, but none of them was convincing.

Wordy: in my opinion, I think your plan is feasible.

Concise: In my opinion, your plan is feasible. I think your plan is feasible.

Wordy: This machine was jointly designed by the old engineer in collaboration with some of his younger colleagues.

Concise: This machine was jointly designed by he old engineer and some of his younger colleagues.

This machine was designed by the old engineer in collaboration with some of his younger colleagues.

The same words are repeated in the first sentence, and different words with the same meaning(“in my opinion” and “I think,” “Jointly” and “in collaboration with”) are used in the second and third sentences..

 

 

 

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