我们常常能读到一些诗歌的译作，不知道大家的感觉如何。不过，我的感觉坏透了。不少译作含糊其辞，让人产生云里雾里的感觉。这真难以判断是诗人的有意为之，还是译者的粗枝大叶。这次读到哈特·克莱恩《我祖母的情书》的两篇译作，上面注明的译者是胡续冬与赵四。如今网络如此便捷，我也想“争鸣”一下，说白一点，不过是分享与交流而已。

我与他们的分歧如下。一是在译诗的过程，我赞成要多加关注一个“雅”字，如 stars 译作“星辰”；

Have you ever heard of a place called Laomendong of Nanjing? The answer may be no, because you’re too young to know that,  although you're a native of Nanjing.

Actually Laomendong, one of the most populated business areas in the past, was in the southern part of the old town. So it was literally called Laochengnan in Nanjing dialect. Luckily the area has been renovated based on traditional styles before the old-time wooden buildings and horse-headed gables have disappeared completely. Adhering to the principle that architecture should be preserved in its original appearance, the architects of the project are trying hard to keep the preserved blocks in their traditional way of life. With Coopers' Alley as its central axis, the new district covers over 150,000㎡,with long-lost lanes running through it.

Now Laomendong is becoming a popular tourist spot. You can come to have a look via the entrance of Changle Avenue. When you ge

博物馆是征集、典藏、陈列和研究自然和人类文化遗产的实物的公共机构，南京博物院就是其中之一的姣姣者，值得南京市民去接受知识、教育和艺术欣赏的好去处。恰逢2014第二届夏季青奥会的东风，我们期待在南京就读的高中学生做好外国客人的导游工作，作好主办地与中国文化的介绍。特发此文，以供参考。

Words and expression_rs:

calligraphy    书法

embroidery    绣品

folklore    民俗

archaeological    考古的，考古学的

ethnological    人种学的，民族学的

literature    文学；文献

treasure    珍宝

the contemporary era    当代

comprehensive items    综合展品

bamboo carving    竹雕

contemporary art&n